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my first text.
Hi, my name is Kirill.
I`m from Belarus and want to learn English.
I`m 23 and study in university.
In may 2013 i find in this site beautiful girl from USA, we speak in skype on videochat.
It`s very hard to me to creat correct sentence in short time.
Today i try to write short text in English and hope that you can help me =) Thanks for everyone.

FKVSeptember 2013투표하세요!
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- my first text.
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- Hi, my name is Kirill.
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- I`m from Belarus and want to learn English.
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- I`m 23 and study in university.
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문장 4
- In may 2013 i find in this site beautiful girl from USA, we speak in skype on videochat.
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- It`s very hard to me to creat correct sentence in short time.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- Today i try to write short text in English and hope that you can help me =) Thanks for everyone.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6