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Our kids is our proud
Hello!
I want to tell you about my older daughter.
She is 5 years old.
About two months ago my wife and me decided to get her to the rithmic gymnastics section in our town.
So, now she is doing her first success.
Their group is preparing to the new year party.
And she is an active partisipant.
In a couple of days I'll tell your how all get on.

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- Hello!
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- I want to tell you about my older daughter.
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- She is 5 years old.
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- About two months ago my wife and me decided to get her to the rithmic gymnastics section in our town.
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- So, now she is doing her first success.
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- Their group is preparing to the new year party.
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- And she is an active partisipant.
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- In a couple of days I'll tell your how all get on.
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