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從LenineDeMoura來的文本 - English

Please help me.
Hello, my name is Lenine Moura and i am from Brazil.
I live in Rio de Janeiro since last January.
I've been in touch with the english language through music, television and books.
Last April I began an english course to help me with grammar and pronunciation.
I study at Brasas english course and I think it is really good.
My motivation to study english is my wish to work with international sales.
I study "International Relations" in UFRJ and I have English classes there too.
I wish to improve my writting and I know you guys can help me. Thank you.
If any of you want to have a conversation on skype just send me a message. See you.

标题
- Please help me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello, my name is Lenine Moura and i am from Brazil.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I live in Rio de Janeiro since last January.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I've been in touch with the english language through music, television and books.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Last April I began an english course to help me with grammar and pronunciation.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I study at Brasas english course and I think it is really good.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- My motivation to study english is my wish to work with international sales.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- I study "International Relations" in UFRJ and I have English classes there too.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I wish to improve my writting and I know you guys can help me. Thank you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- If any of you want to have a conversation on skype just send me a message. See you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9