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This is my first writting.
These sentences are not concern each other.
Today, I saw your profile picture on the news and the news is mentioned about baby clothes.
In the past, many soldiers were managed under the commander's orders.
This papers will be copied until end of the day.
I have got an e-mail about we have got a new job relations.
We will leave from office at 8 o'clock.

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- This is my first writting.
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- These sentences are not concern each other.
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- Today, I saw your profile picture on the news and the news is mentioned about baby clothes.
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- In the past, many soldiers were managed under the commander's orders.
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- This papers will be copied until end of the day.
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문장 5
- I have got an e-mail about we have got a new job relations.
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- We will leave from office at 8 o'clock.
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