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  • A little lecture before English lesson

  • Hello everyone.It's my turn today,and I'm willing to tell you an interesting thing that happened on myself.
  • One day,I was chatting with a lovely lady.You know why I say so?
  • she called me "my little cute kind sister".
  • I replied:"Oh.You are the first one who call me like this." She sent me a smile face and said:"You are my little cute kind kid sister." I didn't know what to say, really.Should I say:"Oh great my dear pretty lovely adult sister"?
  • So I typed:"Good,my longest nickname." She sent a laughing face to me and explained:"You have only sixteen"a laugh,"so I have 30.so you are my little cute kind kid sister." Me:"Yes, very logic." She laughed and said "ok I'm leaving now.bye take care." I said:"bye".
  • I thought that it's the end,I guess that you think so.
  • But I was wrong,I will show you what happened.(show a screen printing).

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    • I replied:"Oh.You are the first one who call me like this." She sent me a smile face and said:"You are my little cute kind kid sister." I didn't know what to say, really.Should I say:"Oh great my dear pretty lovely adult sister"?
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    • So I typed:"Good,my longest nickname." She sent a laughing face to me and explained:"You have only sixteen"a laugh,"so I have 30.so you are my little cute kind kid sister." Me:"Yes, very logic." She laughed and said "ok I'm leaving now.bye take care." I said:"bye".
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