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  • Marilia

  • He said to have acted violently and to have killed his secretary and his lover Marilia, 4 months pregnant of his child, during a scuffle at the worst moment of the discussion which would be started because the victim wanted him breaking-up with his wife.

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    • He said to have acted violently and to have killed his secretary and his lover Marilia, 4 months pregnant of his child, during a scuffle at the worst moment of the discussion which would be started because the victim wanted him breaking-up with his wife.
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