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  • My Second Article

  • Last weekend, i was in the city.
  • I went shopcenters and the english course.
  • Saturday i went to the course.
  • We did conversation and studied some grammer subjects.
  • After the course, in evening, i wanted to have a beatiful dinner and i cooked cupra in the oven and made a very huge salat.
  • It was very delicious.
  • As you know, the fish term has opened.
  • I recommend you to eat fish and salat.
  • Next day, i was looking for a classical shose for myself at shopcenters, almost all day, but i didn't find which as i like and comfortable.
  • End of the day, i was very tired, but again we ate fish.
  • This time my mother cooked acorn and we ate.

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