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Computer fo the elderly
The possesion of a PC have become essential since the last 10 years also for the elderly.
There are so much advantages to use a computer.
In first , the access of internet is important because it allows us to read and write email.
Second they can do shopping what it 's sometimes really difficult due to their reduced mobility.
Third old peoples can store photos and send to their family.
Moreover more and more elderly play video games .
It can be a very good way to have fun and make acquaintance if the game is online.
In conclusion know how to use a computer is very positive for the old people

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- Computer fo the elderly
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- The possesion of a PC have become essential since the last 10 years also for the elderly.
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- There are so much advantages to use a computer.
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- In first , the access of internet is important because it allows us to read and write email.
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- Second they can do shopping what it 's sometimes really difficult due to their reduced mobility.
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- Third old peoples can store photos and send to their family.
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- Moreover more and more elderly play video games .
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- It can be a very good way to have fun and make acquaintance if the game is online.
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- In conclusion know how to use a computer is very positive for the old people
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