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My purpose
Hello!
My name is Shamil.
I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to lean english to continue education at residenture in foreign countries.
I want to be a cardiothoracic surgeon.

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标题
- My purpose
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My name is Shamil.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I am student of Moscow medical university and I want to lean english to continue education at residenture in foreign countries.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I want to be a cardiothoracic surgeon.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4