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I want to travel
I am thinking about traveling in January to Europe.
I know it is going to be very cold but I need new experiences.
Here in Brazil the wheather is very hot, specially in Rio.
Even now, in the middle of de autumn we have days with thirty two degrees Celsius.
Although it is too hot I like here, we have amazing beaches and the nature surrounds us.
I love my coutry but I want to travel and maybe live abroad to have some different opportunities and experiences. Thank you!

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- I want to travel
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- I am thinking about traveling in January to Europe.
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- I know it is going to be very cold but I need new experiences.
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- Here in Brazil the wheather is very hot, specially in Rio.
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- Even now, in the middle of de autumn we have days with thirty two degrees Celsius.
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- Although it is too hot I like here, we have amazing beaches and the nature surrounds us.
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- I love my coutry but I want to travel and maybe live abroad to have some different opportunities and experiences. Thank you!
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