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presentation about me
hi !
My name is Manon !
I want to learn english for a big trip in USA and because i like this country, i like London city to, but i'm so bad in english so i don't speak very well.
I'm funny girl, i've got20 years, and i like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
I study journalism in France.

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- hi !
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- My name is Manon !
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- I want to learn english for a big trip in USA and because i like this country, i like London city to, but i'm so bad in english so i don't speak very well.
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- I'm funny girl, i've got20 years, and i like video games, sport, shopping and travel !
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- I study journalism in France.
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