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  • hyperborea is the Winter festival which visit more than 11000 people every year/ It takes place in the capital of Karelia, Pertozavodsk/ Before this day masters which come from different countryes are making sculptyre out of ice and snow/ a festival procession pass throught the main streets, attracting the attention of bright costumes/ in the evening the musucuans perform their songs/ all musical instruments made out of ice/ peple feel mirth and happy

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    • hyperborea is the Winter festival which visit more than 11000 people every year/ It takes place in the capital of Karelia, Pertozavodsk/ Before this day masters which come from different countryes are making sculptyre out of ice and snow/ a festival procession pass throught the main streets, attracting the attention of bright costumes/ in the evening the musucuans perform their songs/ all musical instruments made out of ice/ peple feel mirth and happy
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