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i present to you
hello, everybody.
my name is christophe, and i would like to perfect my english with you.

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标题
- i present to you
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- hello, everybody.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- my name is christophe, and i would like to perfect my english with you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2