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從Winnie03來的文本 - English

  • A letter answering a request.

  • Dear Vanessa, I read your e-mail and it caught my complete attention because I love protecting the environment as well as you've been doing so far.
  • It's such an interesting petition you've made and I'm sure we will stop that plan from the town council because I've just signed against them at the e-mail you gave me.
  • It seems to me that we have to get more people involved tonhave an stronger support and in that way the town council coud give in to your petition.
  • We could get that people throughout events such as, concerts, fests or picnics by the coastline to show them what would be destroyed by the town council if its plan were executed.
  • Well, that's all for now. All the best. Aaron

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  • 句子 1
    • Dear Vanessa, I read your e-mail and it caught my complete attention because I love protecting the environment as well as you've been doing so far.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
  • 句子 2
    • It's such an interesting petition you've made and I'm sure we will stop that plan from the town council because I've just signed against them at the e-mail you gave me.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
  • 句子 3
    • It seems to me that we have to get more people involved tonhave an stronger support and in that way the town council coud give in to your petition.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
  • 句子 4
    • We could get that people throughout events such as, concerts, fests or picnics by the coastline to show them what would be destroyed by the town council if its plan were executed.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
  • 句子 5