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Text from HaMayAnh - English

  • My House

  • My House is over 5 years old.My family moved to here in 2008.It is rather large and high house.It has total four floors and nine rooms.
  • My house is painted the light orange outside. it looks so warm and attractive. the first floor is the gallery where my father shows his art wooden furniture. the second, it has three rooms, include: living room, my room, and my parents's room. we just only have one kitchen and it is behind the gallery. the third floor has three rooms too. there are:my grandmother's room, my younger sister's room and one the other room but no one lives inside so we keep all of things esle of house inside it. and the highest floor is the religous place.
  • In all of the rooms in my house, i love my room most. i always feel comfortable in my room. it has a cool blue and almost everything is arranged and decorated from my idea. i love my house so much and very happy to live inside.

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    • My House is over 5 years old.My family moved to here in 2008.It is rather large and high house.It has total four floors and nine rooms.
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  • Sentence 2
    • My house is painted the light orange outside. it looks so warm and attractive. the first floor is the gallery where my father shows his art wooden furniture. the second, it has three rooms, include: living room, my room, and my parents's room. we just only have one kitchen and it is behind the gallery. the third floor has three rooms too. there are:my grandmother's room, my younger sister's room and one the other room but no one lives inside so we keep all of things esle of house inside it. and the highest floor is the religous place.
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    • In all of the rooms in my house, i love my room most. i always feel comfortable in my room. it has a cool blue and almost everything is arranged and decorated from my idea. i love my house so much and very happy to live inside.
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