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Text from Parvinka - English

  • HI world!

  • Hi my friends.
  • I am Parvinka from Tajikistan.
  • I live in capital of Tajikistan at the Dushanbe city.
  • I want learn englsh for my carrer and i like travel.
  • Thats why i need to improve my English with your helps.
  • with best regards Parvinka

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English