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The story.
Of course, a man was a wild, too.
Even he had not tried to improve himself, until met a woman.
She said to his,what at all she don't like a such wild life.
She found a dry cave, where they can settle themselves.

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- Of course, a man was a wild, too.
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- Even he had not tried to improve himself, until met a woman.
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- She said to his,what at all she don't like a such wild life.
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- She found a dry cave, where they can settle themselves.
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