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Hello everyone
Hello!
My name is Sergey, I am 29 years old and I live in Ukraine.
I am looking for someone to help me improve my (Pre-Intermediate) English.
I could help you with Russian or Ukrainian

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标题
- Hello everyone
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My name is Sergey, I am 29 years old and I live in Ukraine.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I am looking for someone to help me improve my (Pre-Intermediate) English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I could help you with Russian or Ukrainian
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4