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  • Pay for what?

  • It would not be too abstruse to image the consequence if a government insisted on bringing pressure,or even threat, to bear on another country to settle its disputes with its antagonistic people.
  • However, this absurd drama might not be put on the stage during a shout down which has been executing in U.S.A.
  • About 80 thousand of people sent home by order of their government continued their leave without pay at home,some of they has been protesting on the streets since the day, when representatives and senators in Congress are still in their affray and get their pay.
  • Their voice shall be heard but this time it is not Barack Obama.
  • This time shall be some people else.
  • How the democratic United States settle its dispute with its opposed people to prevent it form developing into a chaotic scene is a absorbing suspense film showing.

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    • It would not be too abstruse to image the consequence if a government insisted on bringing pressure,or even threat, to bear on another country to settle its disputes with its antagonistic people.
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    • About 80 thousand of people sent home by order of their government continued their leave without pay at home,some of they has been protesting on the streets since the day, when representatives and senators in Congress are still in their affray and get their pay.
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    • How the democratic United States settle its dispute with its opposed people to prevent it form developing into a chaotic scene is a absorbing suspense film showing.
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