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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from Aliya2029 - English

  • Everlages

  • Oh no!I forgot the way to my beginning point in Everlages.There are many insects,spiders and snakes in this place.They can sting me,I can die(((.It is so good that I weared long trousers and strong boots.And I used a lot of insect repellent.
  • Look!The ground is shaking!I hear a range noise like an aeroplane engine.I should climb up a tree.Ok,I am on the highest place I can get.Oh!I can not held my arms on a tree any more.I am falling!And right now I am in the swamp.It tries to swallow me!But I am lying flat and beginning to to crawl out very careful.I do all my moves very slowly.And I AM FREE!!!Hurray!

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
    • Oh no!I forgot the way to my beginning point in Everlages.There are many insects,spiders and snakes in this place.They can sting me,I can die(((.It is so good that I weared long trousers and strong boots.And I used a lot of insect repellent.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • Look!The ground is shaking!I hear a range noise like an aeroplane engine.I should climb up a tree.Ok,I am on the highest place I can get.Oh!I can not held my arms on a tree any more.I am falling!And right now I am in the swamp.It tries to swallow me!But I am lying flat and beginning to to crawl out very careful.I do all my moves very slowly.And I AM FREE!!!Hurray!
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2