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  • Yesterday, me and my bestfriends hangout together at parkson and at the same time we were also studying at starbuck. after we finished studying, I decided went to Watson because I really wanted to buy favourites foundation, mascara and eyeliner.
  • Thank God, I have some budget in my wallet so bought its.
  • I am so happy to the death because i got chance to bought my things.
  • My bestfriends also bought their own stuff too.
  • After that, we were walking around in the parskon doing window shopping(girls problem) lol and seeing people in there too.
  • But unlucky us we did not saw any hottie guys around parkson (girls problem) lol again hahaha. okay that's all i wanted to expressed my story. lol

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    • Yesterday, me and my bestfriends hangout together at parkson and at the same time we were also studying at starbuck. after we finished studying, I decided went to Watson because I really wanted to buy favourites foundation, mascara and eyeliner.
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    • After that, we were walking around in the parskon doing window shopping(girls problem) lol and seeing people in there too.
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    • But unlucky us we did not saw any hottie guys around parkson (girls problem) lol again hahaha. okay that's all i wanted to expressed my story. lol
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