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my first day
Hello my name is pauline.
I`m from germany and I wont to learn english.
I think my english is not the best, but my dream is to get anytime to Great Britain.
Now I tell you something about my day at first.
I´m ill and so I don´t get work today and tomorrow.
I sleept out and than I clean my flat, eat something, play with my cat, write with my best friend and so on.
Now it´s evening and I´m here.
Ok I thing it`s enough now.
I hope you have a nice day and evening.
And I`m verry pleased for youre answers. Bye

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- my first day
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- Hello my name is pauline.
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- I`m from germany and I wont to learn english.
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- I think my english is not the best, but my dream is to get anytime to Great Britain.
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- Now I tell you something about my day at first.
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- I´m ill and so I don´t get work today and tomorrow.
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- I sleept out and than I clean my flat, eat something, play with my cat, write with my best friend and so on.
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- Now it´s evening and I´m here.
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- Ok I thing it`s enough now.
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- I hope you have a nice day and evening.
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- And I`m verry pleased for youre answers. Bye
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