Korekty

Text from vaness182 - English

  • End of the year.

  • I'm sick since the Christmas Eve, I felt ill from December 24th till yesterday, I had bronchitis.
  • On December 26th, my mommy took me to the hospital, My cousin works on the hospital, she is doctor.
  • When she looked myself, she interned me on the hospital.
  • I felt alone, but sometimes, as Kami my cousin and Xiomy my girlfriend went to visited me, they brought candies, bread, juices hid on their backpacks.
  • On Saturday, December 29th, I got out the hospital, like outpatients' department.
  • When came back home, I hug to Fifi my kitty, later, I called all my friends for cell phone, I ate "noche buena", it's a dessert, I like it.
  • The last night of the year, Karolette invited us for a party, I couldn't go, I said to Xiomy: "you must go and amuse you", she answer me: "I don't want go without you".
  • I felt sick still, then, I went to sleep at 23 o'clock, and she woke me at midnight.
  • Was beautiful, I woke up and saw her, then I like dance, she don't know but she likes learning, also, we saw the fireworks and we came back to sleep.
  • Yesterday was December 1st, and we made a barbecue. we like cook, and yesterday the weather was warm, and our fathers and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feet.
  • They couldn't walk with shoes on the grass.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • I felt alone, but sometimes, as Kami my cousin and Xiomy my girlfriend went to visited me, they brought candies, bread, juices hid on their backpacks.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • When came back home, I hug to Fifi my kitty, later, I called all my friends for cell phone, I ate "noche buena", it's a dessert, I like it.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • The last night of the year, Karolette invited us for a party, I couldn't go, I said to Xiomy: "you must go and amuse you", she answer me: "I don't want go without you".
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Was beautiful, I woke up and saw her, then I like dance, she don't know but she likes learning, also, we saw the fireworks and we came back to sleep.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Yesterday was December 1st, and we made a barbecue. we like cook, and yesterday the weather was warm, and our fathers and friends came to my home, the condiccion was walk on the grass on her feet.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11