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My day
I got up at 7:30 a.m and the for first thing i did is went to bring some documents at one customers.
After i went to the office and there i was up to a lunch.
I lunched at home and when i finished i back to the office.
Unfortunatley....
I'm always in the office!
=( Aniway I find however a bit of time for study english!

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- I got up at 7:30 a.m and the for first thing i did is went to bring some documents at one customers.
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- After i went to the office and there i was up to a lunch.
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- I lunched at home and when i finished i back to the office.
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- Unfortunatley....
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- I'm always in the office!
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- =( Aniway I find however a bit of time for study english!
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