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  • Tell us about your plans for the future.

  • First of all, I hope to participate in your program.
  • After that, I 'm going to continue my academic career at the University.
  • I want to continue to engage in philosophy.
  • I am especiallyattracted by philosophy of the mind .
  • I am interested in this topic and I want to continue my study of consciousness.
  • Also, I like to teach and I want to do this and on.
  • I think I chose what I want to do in my life.
  • Philosophy is a wonderful thing .
  • It helps to find answers to the most important questions .
  • This is a very exciting activity .

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