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Hi everybody
Hello, my name's Stephanie.
I'm 29 years old!
I live in France near Paris.
I search to improve my english in practising write, read and listen.
Please correct me if you realize that i make several mistake.
I search too friend to writing better in english and i able to learn if you want french. See you soon! Steph

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- Hello, my name's Stephanie.
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- I live in France near Paris.
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- I search to improve my english in practising write, read and listen.
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- I search too friend to writing better in english and i able to learn if you want french. See you soon! Steph
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