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Annual check-up
Every person should visit the doctor at least once or twice a year, because it is necessary to watch over your health.
That is why all schoolchildren, students and some employees of big companies have an annual check-up.
As I am a student, I also have it.
So now I will describe you one of my annual check-ups.

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- Annual check-up
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문장 1
- Every person should visit the doctor at least once or twice a year, because it is necessary to watch over your health.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- That is why all schoolchildren, students and some employees of big companies have an annual check-up.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- As I am a student, I also have it.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- So now I will describe you one of my annual check-ups.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4