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Virus diseases 2
The other virus disease is a more serious one.
It is a scarlet fever.
It is characterized by the appearance of a bright red rush consisting of closely-set red spots.
They usually appear on the second day and after it you will have a high temperature and a sore throat.
On the third or fourth day the rush starts to fade and the temperature falls, so you feel much better.
Though the rush disappears at the end of the first week it is better to stay at home for a month.
Moreover don’t try the self-treatment.
Scarlet fever is very serious disease which has many complications.
But if you are adult don’t worry much about such a disease, because it is a disease of children and young persons.

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- The other virus disease is a more serious one.
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- It is a scarlet fever.
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- It is characterized by the appearance of a bright red rush consisting of closely-set red spots.
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- They usually appear on the second day and after it you will have a high temperature and a sore throat.
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- On the third or fourth day the rush starts to fade and the temperature falls, so you feel much better.
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- Though the rush disappears at the end of the first week it is better to stay at home for a month.
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- Moreover don’t try the self-treatment.
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- Scarlet fever is very serious disease which has many complications.
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- But if you are adult don’t worry much about such a disease, because it is a disease of children and young persons.
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