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I search penfriends!
Hi!
My name is Anna.
I search penfriends because I learning English and I would you like practise it.
I have got skype, e-mail account and facebook.
Give me a message, please.:)

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标题
- I search penfriends!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My name is Anna.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I search penfriends because I learning English and I would you like practise it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I have got skype, e-mail account and facebook.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Give me a message, please.:)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5