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Hi I'm Lara and i would like to learn English well, i think that writing mails I can to improve my English.
i can help you with Italian Language!!

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- HI
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句子 1
- Hi I'm Lara and i would like to learn English well, i think that writing mails I can to improve my English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- i can help you with Italian Language!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2