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Don't be tigerish - save the tiger!
(This is a short leaflet I have to write for one olimpiad.
I'll be glad to get any corrections or tips how to improve the text.Thanks forward!) Attention!
Ussurisky tigers are at the edge of extiction.
Every year 50 of them are dieing at the poachers hands.If you don't want to let tigers vanish...
1.join an animal welfare group 2.create awareness of problem among the population 3.donate money We can reduce fur consuming by common efforts!
Live and let live.

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- Don't be tigerish - save the tiger!
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- (This is a short leaflet I have to write for one olimpiad.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I'll be glad to get any corrections or tips how to improve the text.Thanks forward!) Attention!
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- Ussurisky tigers are at the edge of extiction.
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- Every year 50 of them are dieing at the poachers hands.If you don't want to let tigers vanish...
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- 1.join an animal welfare group 2.create awareness of problem among the population 3.donate money We can reduce fur consuming by common efforts!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- Live and let live.
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