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Trip in Australia
Hello, I live in France and I want to do a trip in a foreign country next year, perhaps in Australia.
I would prefer Australia because I'd rather go in an english speaking country.
I'm not so good in learning languages so I only talk English and a little bit German.
If I travel to Australia, the first thing I want to see there is The Great Barrier Reef !
It's my biggest dream to swim there with exotic corals and fishes !
When I return I'll have so much to tell to my family about this trip !
Thank you so much for the correction !! =D

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- Hello, I live in France and I want to do a trip in a foreign country next year, perhaps in Australia.
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- I would prefer Australia because I'd rather go in an english speaking country.
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- I'm not so good in learning languages so I only talk English and a little bit German.
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- If I travel to Australia, the first thing I want to see there is The Great Barrier Reef !
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- It's my biggest dream to swim there with exotic corals and fishes !
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- When I return I'll have so much to tell to my family about this trip !
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- Thank you so much for the correction !! =D
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