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  • Knowledge is happiness

  • Have you ever felt happy learning a new fact about this world of facts?
  • For sure I don’t mean knowing the latest news of terrorist attacks and like that but the world itself apart from our deeds.
  • The more we learn about it the more we feel for it, like getting to know your new friend better and empathise better.
  • However, sometimes you don’t like to know friends better, you know, while the more you know this real world of ours, the more your appetite is whetted.
  • It is as if you hold a jug made of water bellow a waterfall so that your jug grows containing more water and there will be no end to that.
  • The same way, you come to hug the reality more than before.
  • So, what it has to do with happiness?
  • The very same thing your home has to do with your pleasure of being home again, as they say: “Home, sweet home!” Coming to synchronize more with the reality, you enjoy it more!
  • The world and reality itself become your source of happiness and since they are always around you or to be more accurate, since you are a part of them, you will be always happy.

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    • For sure I don’t mean knowing the latest news of terrorist attacks and like that but the world itself apart from our deeds.
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    • The more we learn about it the more we feel for it, like getting to know your new friend better and empathise better.
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    • However, sometimes you don’t like to know friends better, you know, while the more you know this real world of ours, the more your appetite is whetted.
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    • It is as if you hold a jug made of water bellow a waterfall so that your jug grows containing more water and there will be no end to that.
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    • The very same thing your home has to do with your pleasure of being home again, as they say: “Home, sweet home!” Coming to synchronize more with the reality, you enjoy it more!
      투표하세요!
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    • The world and reality itself become your source of happiness and since they are always around you or to be more accurate, since you are a part of them, you will be always happy.
      투표하세요!
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