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Hi, I'm new in this page!
Hello everyone!, I'm new in this page.
I'm 21, and I want to learn Enghish.
Now, I'm studiying an upper cycle (FPII) of Industrial maintenance.
This work requires a good English speaking, because this people travel a lot to other countries.
This is my little presentation.
Other day, I'll writte other thing. Thanks to all!

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