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my meal
Hi everybody, This midday, I eat one tuna sandwich with mayo sauce and crudity.
For the desert it was a muffin and I drank tropical juice.
It was delicious...
But I ate too much, and I'm thinking to go do sport this evening, because I need to lose weit.
Moreover it has been longtime that I have not done any sport...
I should have more motivation if I want to reach my goal.
It's a little bit complicated with my schudule, so I need more organization.

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- Hi everybody, This midday, I eat one tuna sandwich with mayo sauce and crudity.
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- For the desert it was a muffin and I drank tropical juice.
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- It was delicious...
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- But I ate too much, and I'm thinking to go do sport this evening, because I need to lose weit.
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- Moreover it has been longtime that I have not done any sport...
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- I should have more motivation if I want to reach my goal.
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- It's a little bit complicated with my schudule, so I need more organization.
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