Виправлення

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  • IElTS

  • Trips are different.
  • The pupposes are different too.
  • In our chart shows the purposes of visiting foregn countries by different people.
  • Purposes are "business", "holiday", "visit family" and "other".
  • And there are monthes in which investigated the purposes.
  • In March many people went for business- 73 percent.
  • In means that it is the most businees trip time.
  • Only 18 percent people went for holiday.
  • And for visit family went 6 percent.
  • The March is the most business trip month.
  • The next month is June.
  • In June many people went on holiday- 54 percent and only 29 percent for business.
  • It means that it is holiday time.
  • The next month is September.
  • Again many people went for business- 53 percent.
  • September is the beginning of business time.
  • And only 31 percent went on holiday.It is less than in June.
  • The 34 percent people went for business in December.
  • And more people for holiday- 35 percent.
  • This is explained by the fact of Christmas and New Year.
  • And the 26 percent of peole who visited their families explained by the fact of Christmas and New Year too.

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