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现在就来帮忙修正吧！裸眼

從Herbrou來的文本 - English

  • two small literary sentences to correct

  • Native speakers loving their language, please support me) A palpation of the border between killing and being killed.
  • A naked snapshot of an ego and his world.
  • How does it sound?
  • What do you think?
  • Thanks a lot!!!! Herbrou

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English