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My family.
Hello!
My name is Natalya!
I have a small family - my husband and two my children - daughter and sun.
I have been married for foorteen years old.
My sun is thirteen and daughter is nine years old.
They are at school.

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- My family.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello!
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句子 2
- My name is Natalya!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I have a small family - my husband and two my children - daughter and sun.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I have been married for foorteen years old.
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句子 5
- My sun is thirteen and daughter is nine years old.
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句子 6
- They are at school.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6