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Hi everybody
Hi.
My name is Kostya.
I live in Russia on Ural.
I'm twenty seven years old.
I work ingineer in internet provider company.
I want to learn English because i want to travel to other countries, watch movies and read books on English.
Thanks for help and sorry for mistakes.

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- My name is Kostya.
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