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Text from zihaowang - English

  • Composition Correction

  • People can known each other more convenient than past because of the high-tech, but it not means that we were closer than previous since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
  • A case in point is Massager, a communicate software programmed by Microsoft, offered people a way for long distance talk.
  • For most of people who used this program, the contacts who they talked most frequently are always acquaintances and even the rare acquaintances were also run away if they didn’t talk with each other.
  • (Thanks for Mrs. blmishoe's previous patient correction works, Please accept my heartfelt appreciation.)

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • People can known each other more convenient than past because of the high-tech, but it not means that we were closer than previous since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • A case in point is Massager, a communicate software programmed by Microsoft, offered people a way for long distance talk.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • For most of people who used this program, the contacts who they talked most frequently are always acquaintances and even the rare acquaintances were also run away if they didn’t talk with each other.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4