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Hello
I would like to see my mistakes.
So, please, help me with it.
I'm here, because i would like ti teach english better and I don't have penfriends.
So I want to get it Thanks

poskinOctober 2013赶紧投票吧！
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- Hello
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句子 1
- I would like to see my mistakes.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- So, please, help me with it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I'm here, because i would like ti teach english better and I don't have penfriends.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- So I want to get it Thanks
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4