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  • Dear Sir or Madam Would you need a fourth year engineering student for a 2 or 3 months training period or employment in Thermal and Energy sciences during April –June period ?
  • Having always been enticed by that concerning the thermal and energy sciences I am very motivated and would like to be of help for company in this domain.
  • My internship at “Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Job at the « Energie de France » company have strengthened my choice, heat transferts in bulding envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake for future.
  • My two-year preparation course lets me to join the thermal engineering school of the --- - university, which taught me lifeplace (place of residence) and workplace arrangements.
  • I am hoping that my skills will be welcome in your company, working never afraid me and I always been motivate for this, with serious and involvement in each project I had to do.
  • Please find enclosed my resume.
  • Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you as soon as you can.

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    • Dear Sir or Madam Would you need a fourth year engineering student for a 2 or 3 months training period or employment in Thermal and Energy sciences during April –June period ?
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    • Having always been enticed by that concerning the thermal and energy sciences I am very motivated and would like to be of help for company in this domain.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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    • My internship at “Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Job at the « Energie de France » company have strengthened my choice, heat transferts in bulding envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake for future.
      투표하세요!
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    • My two-year preparation course lets me to join the thermal engineering school of the --- - university, which taught me lifeplace (place of residence) and workplace arrangements.
      투표하세요!
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    • I am hoping that my skills will be welcome in your company, working never afraid me and I always been motivate for this, with serious and involvement in each project I had to do.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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