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  • Hello ^_^ I have a home work for English lesson , i should write it before this Tursday so help me pleaze.
  • I should write a paragpraph about my mother : So my mother have 65 years old, she's borne in a small coastall city in north of Algeria called jijel.She's arose in a simple familly with five brothers and one sister.
  • Although she's not educated but she was a good housewife where she fondle three Children , me and two girls.
  • After all this years Although she's become a little fat and there are ome white hair in her head my mother Still looks young with her tan skin and her big eyes (^_^).
  • thank you all mothers and God protect them (^_^)

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    • I should write a paragpraph about my mother : So my mother have 65 years old, she's borne in a small coastall city in north of Algeria called jijel.She's arose in a simple familly with five brothers and one sister.
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    • After all this years Although she's become a little fat and there are ome white hair in her head my mother Still looks young with her tan skin and her big eyes (^_^).
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