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Observing a Solar Eclipse
At 3pm in Egypt, I began to observing the solar eclipse.
I used convex lens to produce the image of the sun on a white board.
This method helped me to trace the change of the sun shape and protect my eyes too.
I watched on the same time the total solar eclipse on the Internet.

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- Observing a Solar Eclipse
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- At 3pm in Egypt, I began to observing the solar eclipse.
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- I used convex lens to produce the image of the sun on a white board.
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- This method helped me to trace the change of the sun shape and protect my eyes too.
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- I watched on the same time the total solar eclipse on the Internet.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4