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My classmate
My new classmate is fun-loving young woman.
Her name is ploy.
She comes from Bangkok, capital city of Thailand.
She arrived in Chiang Mai three years ago.
I met her in English class at my University.
She is beautiful and friendly.
When I see her face, everything seem slow motion.
This semester, she is studying two classes same as me.

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- My classmate
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- My new classmate is fun-loving young woman.
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- Her name is ploy.
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- She comes from Bangkok, capital city of Thailand.
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- She arrived in Chiang Mai three years ago.
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- I met her in English class at my University.
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- She is beautiful and friendly.
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- When I see her face, everything seem slow motion.
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- This semester, she is studying two classes same as me.
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