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hi everyone
hi my name is gisell.
I like to listen music and read a lot books.
I hope to learn fast english and i wish travel and know a lot countries.

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- hi everyone
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句子 1
- hi my name is gisell.
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句子 2
- I like to listen music and read a lot books.
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句子 3
- I hope to learn fast english and i wish travel and know a lot countries.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3