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  • Facebook

  • Do you have a facebook or a twitter account ?
  • Yes i have a facebook account for 5 years .I had a twitter account but i delete it because i don’t really use it.
  • Why do you use it for ?
  • In first the i use facebook to chat with my friend but i spend most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends.I use also facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell them life a lot on their wall.
  • Moreover i use it for see the life of music artist , actor and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see the informations of the team andthe evolution of the work of the stadium .
  • Sometimes i watch videos that people post on facebook such as the video taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
  • In conclusion ,i use facebook regulary and i really like it because i can do a lot of different thing.a

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Yes i have a facebook account for 5 years .I had a twitter account but i delete it because i don’t really use it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • In first the i use facebook to chat with my friend but i spend most of the time on facebook seeing the news of my friends.I use also facebook to post photos like my holiday photos, but i don’t like people who tell them life a lot on their wall.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Moreover i use it for see the life of music artist , actor and groups like the group of the football team « Olympique de Marseille » where i can see the informations of the team andthe evolution of the work of the stadium .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Sometimes i watch videos that people post on facebook such as the video taken from the TV of « le petit journal ».
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • In conclusion ,i use facebook regulary and i really like it because i can do a lot of different thing.a
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7