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Alice Della Rocca hated skiing school.
She hated the alarm clock at 07:30 a.m. and in the Christmas holiday too.
She hated the wool tights because they burn her thigh, the gloves that paralyse her fingers and the crash helmet pushs her cheeks.

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句子 1
- Alice Della Rocca hated skiing school.
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句子 2
- She hated the alarm clock at 07:30 a.m. and in the Christmas holiday too.
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句子 3
- She hated the wool tights because they burn her thigh, the gloves that paralyse her fingers and the crash helmet pushs her cheeks.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3