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My photo profile
My photo profile is a picture of a character, tired of a video games very popular with young people, between 12 and 35 years old.
Her name is Morgana, she is a fallen angel and she was created by developers for bring a sinister atmosphere in the game.
She looks like an elf, with her purple skin and pointed ears, big and an empty eyes.
Her hairs are also purple and long, in battle.
She has got jagged wings.
She is always curved, like a zombie and seems have a craziness regard.
Her sister calls Kaylee and is an angel.
She is her contrary: white skin, blond hair, clear eyes.
Many players think she is a pleasant character because chaotic and apocalypstic side...
I love her scary appaerance.

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- My photo profile is a picture of a character, tired of a video games very popular with young people, between 12 and 35 years old.
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- Her name is Morgana, she is a fallen angel and she was created by developers for bring a sinister atmosphere in the game.
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- She looks like an elf, with her purple skin and pointed ears, big and an empty eyes.
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- Her hairs are also purple and long, in battle.
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- She has got jagged wings.
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- She is always curved, like a zombie and seems have a craziness regard.
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- Her sister calls Kaylee and is an angel.
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- She is her contrary: white skin, blond hair, clear eyes.
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- Many players think she is a pleasant character because chaotic and apocalypstic side...
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- I love her scary appaerance.
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