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  • In 2009,I was an exchange-student in America, at that time it was my big step to feel rich of American culture that I ever had.
  • I learn many things from there like how to live with people who are difference nation , language, culture and everything but they can live in the same land normally.
  • It is the big point that I am in love with it, love how they can be union even though they are different and this is very unique.
  • After that I decide to work with American Embassy in Thailand, then I tried so hard to get a good university to prepare myself for the future and looking for the opportunity to make my dream come true.
  • I always follow the new up-date about American Embassy’s page on facebook,how you work or many activities in Thailand like Happy New Year video, Ambassador Kristie on The TV.
  • Show and how Ambassador Kristie learns many things about Thailand such as culture and language.
  • That made me know that she does not forgot about little thing to communicate with my country even though she has many choices to do this by let others work for her but she does it by herself.
  • Because Ambassador Kristie shows how to live in the difference nation and she is satisfy to does it, also every employee in Embassy satisfy to work and feel Thai culture, so I want to be one part of it to learn how you think about my country, how to live and company with other nation and how to be a union even though we are not the same.
  • This is all I want to join an internship in American Embassy in Thailand to get a great experience in this summer.

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    • In 2009,I was an exchange-student in America, at that time it was my big step to feel rich of American culture that I ever had.
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  • Sentence 2
    • I learn many things from there like how to live with people who are difference nation , language, culture and everything but they can live in the same land normally.
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    • It is the big point that I am in love with it, love how they can be union even though they are different and this is very unique.
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  • Sentence 4
    • After that I decide to work with American Embassy in Thailand, then I tried so hard to get a good university to prepare myself for the future and looking for the opportunity to make my dream come true.
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  • Sentence 5
    • I always follow the new up-date about American Embassy’s page on facebook,how you work or many activities in Thailand like Happy New Year video, Ambassador Kristie on The TV.
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    • That made me know that she does not forgot about little thing to communicate with my country even though she has many choices to do this by let others work for her but she does it by herself.
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  • Sentence 8
    • Because Ambassador Kristie shows how to live in the difference nation and she is satisfy to does it, also every employee in Embassy satisfy to work and feel Thai culture, so I want to be one part of it to learn how you think about my country, how to live and company with other nation and how to be a union even though we are not the same.
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